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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-06-11 09:36 PM



Remember This

Remember this
when you find
yourself alone,
the one you care for
would be with you
if they honestly
cared for you.
Think about it.

JamesLee
11June
2012

I mean they're
long gone...


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-06-11 09:42 PM


You're with yourself, that says a lot.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2012-06-12 03:39 PM


I'll give that some thought James
Great angle of approach here in this one.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

chourouk
Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52

3 posted 2012-06-12 04:40 PM


I passed here humbly in front of this feelings.
How beautiful your feelings.
Thank you Jimes i'm really enjoyed

My respect
Chourouk

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2012-06-14 10:13 PM


Thank you Jerry, ethome and chourouk for the nice responses...James
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