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Spirit Island |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Spirit Island Fluffy clouds fill the azure skies it’s always summer in this world where she comes to reflect on life Ancient mountains stand as sentries keeping out hurtful memories which can consume the heart and soul Jagged peaks waiting to be climbed have shadows cast by passing clouds silently waiting her signal The wind speaks to her through the trees whispering thoughts that bring her peace while cooling her brow with caress Water ripples in crystal lake soothing the soul from deep within and bringing clarity of thought Surrounding trees form protection sheltering walls of evergreen sharing their strength through ancient roots Circled by earth, water and sky she can examine in safety the past, on this Spirit Island Karen Mc Neil June 4, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, beautifully done, Karen, especially the idea that the past can be visited without trouble or strife. A nice thing. Trying to reach out the past deeds or perhaps misdeeds. Beautiful. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, so beautiful! You created the perfect ambiance for peaceful serene meditation. Margherita |
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