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A Nice Walk
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A Nice Walk |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 I came in from outdoors A nice walk I took She asked me If the sun was shining To tell the truth I hadn't paid any mind to the weather Still, she expects an answer And if it isn't the right one She'll think me utterly mad ©May 17, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
ah my dear friend I think it is true you are mad, maddly in love with some lucky woman. Love looks good on you Jerry! Lori  |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Must've been one hell of a walk :P Enjoyed. -Trina |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, indeed, Lori. I don't know how lucky she is, but I am indeed madly in love with her. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hell-o-o-o-o-o Trina. Good to see you again. Thank you for stopping by, and yes! The walk was one hell of a one . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-31-2012 09:27 AM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Many, many of my footsteps have been along areas such as this, my friend ... just me, and Outside ... and no one really wanted to know what it was truly about. Nice... j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sometimes, j, it is the best of times, to borrow and old quote and leaving out the rest of it, for usually when man and thoughts and walks conspire together it is reflected back as just a little self introspection, or merely a fun, happy walk with nothing profound to mull over and think about. Thanks for the visit, it is appreciated. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If she is your inspiration, you are lucky. If you are in love with her... she is lucky.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You could be right on both accounts, Karilea, but for sure you are dead-on right on "If she is your inspiration, you are lucky.? She is. I am. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
*grin* your words just make me smile...Tell her for me I am glad she is your inspiration because you sure write *good* *HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Ah,Karen, your words make me feel good. I will certainly tell her, that is for sure. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's the kind of madness that makes us all human beings, immersed in BEING. And isn't that just a great state to be in? And after all ... the sun shone within your heart. No doubt about that! Very appealing. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, Margherita, it IS a great state to be in, I agree whole heartedly. Thank you be being in my plane of existence, my friend. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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