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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2012-05-27 02:10 AM



The love is the wind in our sails,
without it we stay in the port,
the sea would be a stony ghost
and the sky a mirror without excuse,

If it is there, we sail
for Hollywood or Taj Mahal,
we discover the marvels
of the most improbable islands,

The softest creeks sparkle,
let us cast anchor on the turquoise blue water,
there are treasures for those who sail,
the love is the wind in our eyes.


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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2012-05-27 05:45 AM


Lovely, yann. Says so much about the desires of the heart.
                            Ida

Zall
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2 posted 2012-05-27 05:50 AM


Beautiful.
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-05-27 06:53 AM


Nice work, Yann. Love is the wind in our sails. Beautifully said.

~*~ Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.--Aristotle ~*~

Startime1955
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4 posted 2012-05-27 10:37 AM


So true and so beautifully said...a pleasure to read...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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5 posted 2012-05-27 01:12 PM


Yann, enjoyed the wind of love.
Well done, ms. e

ethome
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6 posted 2012-05-27 02:02 PM


Yann
This is metaphorically beautiful expressions of the beauty of love.
Bravo!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2012-05-28 05:44 PM


Sailing along with you, dear Yann, this is precious and enticing.

Margherita

Prasad Nataraj
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8 posted 2012-05-29 02:01 AM


True, love is about taking chances, this is beautiful writing, Yann! Fine writing!.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

2islander2
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by the sea
9 posted 2012-05-29 02:12 AM


thanks ida, i should have write : love is the wind in our hearts,


yann

2islander2
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by the sea
10 posted 2012-05-29 02:12 AM


thanks zall, thanks very much,


yann

2islander2
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11 posted 2012-05-29 02:13 AM


thanks jery, so kind,

yann

2islander2
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12 posted 2012-05-29 02:14 AM


hugs  startime, thanks,

yann

2islander2
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13 posted 2012-05-29 02:14 AM


thanks ebony, so kind,


yann

2islander2
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14 posted 2012-05-29 02:16 AM


thanks ethome, margherita and prasad for the warm and kind comments, and readings too,
have a nice day


yann

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