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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2012-05-26 06:39 PM


Impatience
And intolerance
And broken promises
What do you want from me?
My tears?
To bleed?
To scream?
You say to be strong
But there is so much that is wrong
But I won't let you see me cry
I will curl up internally
And slowly, I will die
You won't notice my pain
You won't see the strain
And you won't see me again.

~Arana Darkwolf~
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed be.

© Copyright 2012 Rachael Fuchsberger - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-05-26 06:43 PM


Much impassioned internal woe within these lines. Usually, when such thoughts are being thought unbeknownst to the one so stressed out, is that there is always a light at the end of that infuriating tunnel. Always.

~*~ Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.--Aristotle ~*~

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2012-05-27 01:30 PM


when darkness falls
then Phoenix rises
to light the sons
of new horizons
Ms. E

2islander2
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3 posted 2012-05-27 01:43 PM


very touching, rachael, i feel sad , thanks for sharing these words,


yann



ethome
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4 posted 2012-05-27 02:00 PM


Wow this is just so sad.
Strong emotionally phrased piece.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
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5 posted 2012-05-27 02:16 PM


Your emotions come out so clearly and I am glad for that because there is healing in writing it...My heart goes out to you...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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