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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Silver and across the sky you spoke like rain in dancing drops showering liquid language slight silver kisses in play cascading persistent poetry in a butterfly drizzle of shower’s dawn my eyes met mist overtaken by exposure and when I went to speak I only heard a sigh "I wish that I was beautiful or you were half way blind" |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery ... great ending lines in particular! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
love this! the imagery is wonderful- there is something special about rain as a metaphor Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Such a wonderful poem, 1slick_lady. The wish, desire, wonderment is all there. You named yourself right, you are 1slick_lady. ~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah Slick, . . . very, very nice, my friend...miss seeing you here...flowed and melded perfectly. j. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Always the romantic . . . Take care little star John . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful words, Helen. You are one of the few that can do really good romantic poetry. Ida |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
such a beautifully put together poem, loved it! Love is the life of the soul... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick...we should talk...enjoyed you here lady |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and when I went to speak I only heard a sigh and sometimes that says everything. *S* I miss you, lady... ((((HUGS)))) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Awestruck at the sweetness and beauty of this... Truly enjoyed! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you. That's all. Thank you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
slight silver kisses in play cascading persistent poetry in a butterfly drizzle ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's what I'm talking about!! Isn't that just like a lady, and just about as slick as it gets!! I'm just feeling so sad today~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
She was ... always.... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
): This is lovely. -Juju |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A little gem. Thank you, Lori, for bringing this back to the top now. She was quite uniquely creative with words! Godspeed, dear Helen! Love, Margherita |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sending this up to the top for another round, it is so beautifully representative of Helen's skills and personality. We stay connected on soul level ... Love, Margherita |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
think of us, up there, missing you dear sweet wordcrafter extraordinaire, and please say a prayer for us all down below  |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
*screenhug* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My arms never held you... my heart will never let you go. Thank you for being my friend and loving me... not in spite of my flaws but because of them. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Bring back more of her poems . . . John . |
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