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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-01-11 06:18 PM



Hawaiian January

Surfed most of Saturday,
danced late into the night
with a woman named Ocean,
she was truly a delight.
She said tomorrow
was her birthday,
she had a new bikini
to break in,
she told me if I was
good with suntan lotion
I could be her best friend.

JamesLee
10January
2010











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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2010-01-12 01:24 PM


I love the poem, Sun, sea and love, it is very well written and a very enjoyable share for all those who miss hawaian atmosphere...

thanks for the very enjoyable read

yann

vandana
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2 posted 2010-01-13 12:29 PM


good read
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2010-01-18 05:25 PM


now THAT is a January to have !

a pleasant 'slice of Hawaiian life' write ...

applause!!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2010-01-18 06:57 PM


~ and James rubbed Ocean all over with suntan lotion and now he is her best friend! Aw, I love happy endings! ~ or is this just the beginning?!?


Linda

www.lindadowd.com

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