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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-04-05 02:18 PM


She is the air that I see
She is the air that surrounds me

One of the things I cannot decide
Is where beneath Heaven
Begins the all encompassing sky
Where she resides
The lack of oxygen sometimes kills
Down here below Heaven
Thoughts of her sometimes fills
The void that chills

She is the air that I need
She is the air that I breathe

There is nothing I would rather feel
Than the cool, calm caress
Of a wind that somehow heals
This pleasure I steal
The desire for this thing is so much
The closeness of her breath
The way only it can touch
It is my only crutch

She is the air that tastes so sweetly
She is the air so completely

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Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 2010-04-05 06:52 PM


Most excellent! I bow to you and yours for this fine piece of writing. Just remember to keep breathing. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2010-04-09 06:23 PM


Enjoyed...James
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2010-04-09 09:46 PM


sighs* I love this!!
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