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passing shadows
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0 posted 2010-04-03 11:13 AM





Sometimes the light shines a certain way
and I forget everything I want to say.
I am grateful there within that light
and it carries over into night.

Desire fills my eyes and heart
and I dread the time we are apart.

But soon that light will fade
and things will become clear,
when I get up from the bed we made
I will wonder what keeps me here.
But I will wait for the cascade
of that light to reappear.


© Copyright 2010 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2010-04-03 06:13 PM


Yo dear Passing shadows,

It looks like the work is progressing nicely.

Love Bobby

Andrew Scott
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2 posted 2010-04-03 08:20 PM


Shadows... make sure he puts a sky light in that thing.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

passing shadows
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3 posted 2010-04-03 11:08 PM


Bobby, yes we got the walls on today! Thank God. It won't be long.

Andrew, LOL yeah and sky light would be just dandy

The Lady
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4 posted 2010-04-05 11:19 PM



extraordinary poem Dixie
ummm... sensual!


Margherita
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5 posted 2010-04-06 01:25 PM


Sometimes it just happens like this, you expressed this special moment with your usual skill, dear Dixie.

Love,
Margherita

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