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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2010-04-02 03:30 PM



What do those eyes
see on nights closure?
Sepia light nights, laughing
softly in candlelight glow.
Thrilling hearts to love
deeper than the calm
waters of your eyes.
Timeless, constant, though we
change, immaculate they stay.
Fear,joy, all inbetween
shine for pure understanding.
Glimpse of glinting in
side glances, undoing the
hearts knots with ease.
Sweet wonder of life,
golden light dancing alive
across the sheening dark
shores of pupil beauty.
Secret light shining the
way down the galaxy
of eternal divine love.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 2010-04-02 06:10 PM


A fine view.  I think we've all looked into such depths a time or two.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2010-04-02 07:12 PM


lovely to see you back again you've been missed

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2010-04-02 07:20 PM


fine romantic imagery ...

I am particularly fond of the beginning:

"What do those eyes
see on nights closure?
Sepia light nights, laughing
softly in candlelight glow.
Thrilling hearts to love
deeper than the calm
waters of your eyes."

I hope you are doing well too?!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2010-04-03 05:14 AM


Your long awaited return....

"sigh"....soaking up the words...

They think of you at nights closure....

~Milly

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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Oregon
5 posted 2010-04-04 01:29 AM


Loveliness.  Loveliness!

~K

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
6 posted 2010-04-09 01:41 AM




so beautifully romantic... sigh


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