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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Pondering "Relationships take two hearts desiring togetherness to continue." She was so special for me and I'd like to believe that I was special for her too, but I only need to ponder my current state of affairs and realize that this is not true for her, for if she thought I was so special she would be with me, surely she couldn't resist someone as special as me, as I couldn't resist a woman as special as her. I am the person that held her in high esteem and now I know that I must let go of her and savor the good times within my memory while saying goodbe to a relationship that I desired with all of my heart... JamesLee 28March 2010 Pondering |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
You expressed yourself well and I enjoyed reading your poem. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
No wonder the great Shakespeare said that parting is such sweet sorrow! James, your poem is emblematic of such sweetness and sorrow, and I am lost for words to suggest a solution! Sometimes we must accept the inevitable, and bear the burden thereof; such is the calling to maturity of heart and mind. Art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, Pondering is good for the soul. It’s always good to think about things. Someday you will hit it lucky, and find someone that ponders with you, on mutual things. Just be patient. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - at times we must do what we must do... BC |
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