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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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baby shoes are not in antique boxes now and gone dogs are still barking evenings as if the moon was a listening master the lawns are always greener after burials something about spent soul miracle grow depth as the gold tooth black man calls it says the dark dirt has all been born again like ja-hova been redoing his garden after the widow tears brought all of their water and waved some folded flags over white stones rest in easy kind of voodoo conjuring maybe like that space between the channels on tv after unhappy endings turn to new eye days _____________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a sad reminder~~ I will be revisiting in a week. M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so masterfully written, yet so very sad, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
your writing still amazes me.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strange, this... as I was coming home tonight after a field of differing trials there on the corner of This and That stood a man before a Subway eatery... mouthing words I could not hear singing something into winds we could not see...but that bounced our cars all the same... and here you are... singing his strange songs... but most likely not by your lonesome blue skies...  thanks for this...it brings so much into someone's perspective. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A fine read Dark-one. The feel is equal to your name and style. Thanks for sharing. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladies and gent..humble thanks to each of you.. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"and gone dogs are still barking evenings as if the moon was a listening master the lawns are always greener after burials after unhappy endings turn to new eye days" ____________________________________________ The tone, imagery and meaning in this is excellent! This is seriously your best poem to date! Now that's saying something because all of your poems are beyond compare and top notch! I relate to your words more than I can express. |
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