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0 posted 2010-01-10 12:37 PM


Wake up in the morning.
Smile at the rising sun.
Feel its warmth pressed against my skin.
Look around and wander about my night of pure sin.
And...
I cry a tear for those missed
Those gone forever with their last breath
I just wish I could have the last kiss
Smell your hair
Feel your breath
Hold you close
Your small hand in mine

She doesn't understand my pain
The loss of one so near

I felt the love of a daughter
Once
She looked up to me
Expected me to protect her from every pain
God called her away by stealing her breath
I beg him to bring her back safe

I felt the love of another
Briefly
I felt it
Once

I had the love of a family
A family of not blood
Lost to violence
Once
I had the love of a family

Tears in my eyes I beg her to understand my pain
Tears in my eyes I crawl on my knees
Only if she could hear me
For my lips stay sealed
While I watch through the window
Hands busy at work
The kitchen hot and loud
Feel the sweat trickle down my neck
My silent brooding wearing thin on my back

Must stay strong
Let her be, let her stay happy
My baby girl gone forever.

"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."

"Hold faithfulness and sincerity as first principles."

-Confucius

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1 posted 2010-01-10 12:53 PM


This is full of anguish and incredibly sad, Zach.

Alison

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2 posted 2010-01-10 09:28 PM


I won't lie and say I understand, because I have known losses like that, nor anything so intensely painful.
But thanks for sharing.
Jaime

Hey, nobody's human!

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