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Spring haiku - in response to lil Margherita's excellent haiku
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Spring haiku - in response to lil Margherita's excellent haiku |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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Spring has lost its spring. The March lion ate the lamb. Please, Summer; spring Spring! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Still waiting for Spring to spring here  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Michael, how nice that you felt inspired to write this after reading my own Spring haiku. Sadly the times seem not mature ... for the lion and the lamb to lie together in the grass in peace! Excellent haiku! Spring is bound to spring, the birds have told me ... Love, Margherita  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Margherita - the lion and lamb may lay down together, but one of them isn't going to sleep very well. It is as God intended. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is too funny, Michael! Love it! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is a clever haiku....loved the ending! Luckily Spring has sprung beautifully here! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I love the humour of this piece. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
its that damn pollen. I've been Haikuing like crazy. sneezing, watery eyes, haikking up stuff...geesch!.....nice job sailor |
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