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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2010-03-24 01:54 AM



I picked you up,
limp in my arms
"Lifeless."
you told me.

No, not lifeless, I said.
Just limp.

I pushed on your chest
moving love through your veins
blew laughter into your lungs
repeated the process a few times

tilted you on your side
when you coughed up sadness

I laughed and said:
"See? Just limp."

__________________________________
(s)pam.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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Earl Brinkman
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Osaka, Japan
1 posted 2010-03-24 01:58 AM


A poetic treat that should get rave reviews.
Honeybee
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2 posted 2010-03-24 01:59 AM


I love the way you express yourself....it's very softly moving.
And I wish that someone would perform this kind of CPR on me!  A lot of us probably need this kind~

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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
3 posted 2010-03-24 02:07 AM


This might be my favorite.  I have to go back and start a Paul file - would you mind if I saved these?

Ali-boop-boop-ba-doop

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
4 posted 2010-03-24 10:46 AM


Earl... Thank you kindly.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
5 posted 2010-03-24 10:47 AM


Honeybee... I'll buy you a beer, and we'll go from there.

Aliboo... Thank you, dearest. No, I do not mind.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2010-03-24 11:50 AM


amazing!
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
7 posted 2010-03-25 02:57 AM


fanks.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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