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Moonbeam Flowers. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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Plucking moonbeams from the sky, I bent them into origami flowers. Placing each on the hotel floor in a soft lit path from where you showered to where we would both eventually sleep. The soft glow of the moon lit your hips, highlighted the clefts of muscle near your knees. It made our forty dollar room priceless, the way it shone on your face in the dark. I plucked moonbeams from the sky, making origami flowers. Placing one behind your ear I kissed you in the soft dark. ______________________________ (s)pam. Paul Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I'm suprised that this hasn't received any replies......You've made love in a mere hotel room so beautiful and ethereal. This poem is so lovely and romantic. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
All of his are wonderful -Juju |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Honeybee... Thank you. You flatter me. Juju, thank you. You're so nice to me.  Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Wonderful writing Paul. You drew me into your emotions in that small hotel room. Z. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks Zeitgeist. I am glad you got something out of my poem. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This is probably the most romantic poem I've read in a long time. Excellent. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks Clamchowder. Is this going to become a contest? I like winning... Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is outstanding, dear Paul! It is in fact a keeper! Love, Margopargo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Clamchowder? |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Margopargo... You're too kind to me. Always. But this is why I love you. Vandana... I'm glad! Clamchowda... You'll get used to it. It suits you.  Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thanks, but no thanks. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
So serious. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I guess you have earned a new fan today even if I don`t agree that love is the binding ingredient in peanut butter! Nice poem though. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Well thank you Earl! I am honored to have you following, should you continue to do so. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very beautiful |
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