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2islander2
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0 posted 2010-03-21 04:38 AM


Chocolate time
I swallow your flavoured tongue,
I’m just happy like a kiss,
your entangled youth spins round.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (03-21-2010 11:46 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-03-21 04:22 PM


Wow, dear Yann, how absolutely delightful! This love is creatively tasty!

Love and joy.
Margherita

Sunshine
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2 posted 2010-03-21 04:58 PM


Yann...

it's not fair to temp
with cocoa....

this is a fun read. Left
me with a smile.




passing shadows
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3 posted 2010-03-24 01:12 PM


this is cute!
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
4 posted 2010-03-29 12:36 PM


Yum.

A

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2010-03-29 08:59 PM


Enjoyed...James
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