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Open Poetry #46

Silent shout

gdcod3player
Member

since 2009-09-13

Posts 70
California

0 posted 2010-03-21 01:25 AM

Where is my reply
I cant find you
Is this god unleashing on me
a regime that has crossed the line
I have found gold in your eyes
Jesus let me live one more night
Let me fight

I want you to learn my name
That prize is in my grasp
She would never look at mine
You would confess that im not in your head
Just let me look in your eyes one last time
Do my eyes shout silently?

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2010-03-21 04:02 AM

Beautiful poem, deep tribute to love and to the loved one....

regards

yann

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2010-03-21 01:36 PM

I am glad to see you return here!!!

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2010-03-21 07:33 PM

Silence speaks. You write the heart of longing for a sacred fire. Well done.

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