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Amethyst. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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I painted stained glass pictures on paper hoping to shatter them into buckets of light and pour them across my bed making love to the early morning rays pouring over your neck catching the strength in your eyes just as they first open I could see the gems inside your eyes taste the value in your tongue when it brushes mine inside your perfect mouth smell the scent of lilac winds upon your breast I could see the gems inside your eyes shining bright amethyst raindrops pouring yourself down my skin I could sense the possibility of becoming whole. ___________________________ (s)pam. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Paul you write beautifuly. The essence of this women and what she means to you shine through in your words. Awsome. Zeitgeist |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This poem Paul...is perfection. I am in awe. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Ziggy... Thank you. You are far too kind, and I am flattered. Your poetry has been wonderful lately, even if I haven't commented, I've been reading. Chalmo Galmo... You sir, have just placed me into some giant shoes I fear I cannot fill. I will trust your word and your tastes however, because your poetry is surely much closer to perfection than my own. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nice...especially like the first stanza... j. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lucky lady! |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
thank you  Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
What they said and more. More of what they said and more of what you write. Both work for me. A |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
ooh la la~~now this is gorgeous....you're making me swoon over here! lol Truly, this is beautiful and the imagery is perfect! |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Alison... Thank you. I appreciate your kind words, and the high frequency with which you place them upon me. Honeybee... Well... Thanks! Glad to have made you swoon a little. It does the body good. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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