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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-03-10 03:39 PM


You You You

Your picture
is on my wall,
smiling at me me me.
You you you...
I want to hold you.
I want to do much more.
I love kissing you
you're the woman that I adore.
Someday we'll pass the hours
of the night and day away
wrapped up in each others arms
where I can soak up every slice
of the beauty of your charms.
Stay with me as long as you desire,
you can be my everything,
you know how much I love you,
you're the woman that
wears my ring.
You you you.

JamesLee
10March
2010





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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-03-10 05:41 PM


She inspires you lovingly from the wall I see, dear James. Hopefully she will come and stay. If she wears your ring, I am sure she feels like you too.

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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2 posted 2010-03-13 03:32 PM




lovely James!

Billie Cullimore
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3 posted 2010-03-14 11:40 PM


  Lucky Lady
  
Billie C.

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4 posted 2010-03-19 01:05 AM


I like this, James.

A

2islander2
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5 posted 2010-03-21 04:23 AM


very  inspiring love. Enjoyed a lot.

yann

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