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In the Shy of Morn's Light
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In the Shy of Morn's Light |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In the Shy of Morn's Light There is a moment of peace that with vibration softly hums when first the earliest light of shy green sunrise quietly comes Nanosecond split of light breaking away from night A moments shy of day reveals emerald eyes have come to play Not many see this emerald revealed in sunrise's prism first unveiled except those who arise, one with Thee, to stand in early and watch with me Then through the passage of the day as Sun attends its charted way There is a moment of peace around that with vibration softly sounds When too soon the sunset shimmers last and purple layers come to cast Soft twilight filtering over all and takes with it into the past Then sets this day in all its bright, soft now into this purple twilight And in this peace that comes to me, cherish always how it should be For as day has passed to night, eyes of emerald hold shyest light And shadows do not stand apart, but meld as one to hold this heart. ~*~ Repost, revised 6 Mar 10 |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Divine comes to mind love you, A |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sis...Oh so lovely!!!  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful, Karilea. I especially love those first two lines. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dawn inspired you most beautifully, dear Karilea! Love your awareness of beauty. Love, Margherita  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Karilea! There is so much beauty to be found if we only have the eyes to see it. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very beautiful, Karilea. I agree with Alison. Owl |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This is what I consider poetry, Sunshine. Beautiful. And a treasure to keep and to be read over and over again. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
enchanting Karilea and something about it is so peaceful as if something long awaited has come at last |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love the palette from which you have painted this colorful and lovely landscape...very nice |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A really lovely poem dear Karilea, A pleasure to read. love. Lindsay |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
That is beautiful, Karilea. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well things around these blue halls may change, but some things remain constant....one of those is the lovely sunshine beams of beauty cast in poetry form onto these pages by you K....thank you for being and remaining a great poet and for this poem... Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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