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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan 
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Storms Standing in the dark, watching the storm, I trace the rain down the window. Memories cloud my thoughts. The past, like the gale, rages, swirls and crashes, tormenting my soul. I could have done better, I know that. I could have worked less, I could have listened more. But, when it got bad, when our dreams faded, I did everything a simple man like me knew how to do to save it. Standing in the dark, Watching the storm. I peer through the tempest, searching for my haven, for an answer to the torrent raging in my heart. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Inner turmoil is a storm of far reaching magnitude. Those waves that soothe are forgiveness. Deep read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there are things we all look back and say "I could have done better" about great write! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is really very good - don't you wish you could read the answers to all life's questions in those rain drops sliding down the window pane? A |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Thank you TD for your kind reply. When calming the storm seams next to impossiable, then learning to ride its currents is the next best thing. Zeitgeist. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
yes shadow, the road to growth is filled with the clarity of hindsight. Zeitgeist. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
yes allison, I truely do. thank you for your reply Zeitgeist. |
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