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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2010-02-26 10:40 AM

I love your waves
your inner greys
your perfect pitch
the voice that brings
our summer song

your orange crush
and how correct
your t's connect
right beside
your dotted i's,
so fine

i marry you
each morning that i rise
and know my heart
steers straight
with time

upon your lips
rekissed, but
i was always there,
regardless

you just needed
to remind me.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

1 posted 2010-02-26 11:19 AM

To only be on the other side
of such affection,
and meaning
is beyond fathom.

As no more blessed could he be,
who would deserve to have this.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2010-02-27 12:16 PM

inkedgoddess

"upon your lips
rekissed, but
i was always there,
regardless

you just needed
to remind me."

You are indeed a goddess...

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2010-02-27 12:54 PM

gorgeous! this made me feel light and airy and ready to land softly

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2010-03-01 08:47 AM

"I love your waves
your inner greys "
These opening lines were so awesome, inked.
And the rest of the poem was wonderful thoughts about rekindling love each and every morning. Kinda hot too. lol

Well done.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2010-03-01 09:31 AM

This is terrific, dear Michele!

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2010-03-05 11:48 PM

Is it enough to say that I love your poetry and seek it out. This did not disappoint me one bit. It's just what I look for with you - poetry that touches me inside.

A

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2010-06-14 07:51 PM

Love your style, good goddess!

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

8 posted 2010-06-14 10:24 PM

"i marry you, each morning that i rise"

intense. loved it.

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

9 posted 2010-06-16 08:28 PM

this is hot~~~ love it ~*~

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

10 posted 2010-06-16 11:57 PM

Very romantic.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

11 posted 2010-06-17 01:44 AM

as always amazing

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2010-06-20 12:28 PM

inkedgoddess - your writings are always touching, as this...

BC

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