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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-02-17 06:43 PM


Circa 2002

Oh this is nice,
pretty girls
on my left
and on my right.
Keep this up
and I'll look like
Rocky racoon,
another 30 minutes
and I'll return
to my room,
or maybe I'll go
swimming in this ocean,
come out dripping wet
and ask a pretty girl
to rub my back with lotion.
And if she says yes
I'll rub some on her too.
French Riviera
circa 2002.

JamesLee
17February
2010





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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2010-02-18 09:29 AM


giggling here
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2010-02-18 07:24 PM


Thank you passing shadows for the nice response...James
2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2010-02-20 03:16 AM


exquisite and kind of free atmosphere, I love the atmosphere and the lovely images of the poem.

regards

yann

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