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Luna Hush
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Luna Hush |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Luna Hush Verdict of absolution, oh goddess Pyres pure thy reverence, set upon a silent earth Turning slowly, without motion, without sound Trace in alabaster, the glow of filmy clouds part lips One china cheek, a sense of awe flows golden its glimpse Stream behold mirror, liquid pursuit softly sway Inspirer of mellow mood, Gentle whimsy of night sky Thy vision is the yearning between darkness and light Prediction of waking warmth Hold registry of noble man and maiden fair To look upon thy veiled face, and know serenity Copyright Kkh 2/16/10 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
what a wonderful set of opening and closing lines in particular!: "Verdict of absolution, oh goddess Pyres pure thy reverence, set upon a silent earth Turning slowly, without motion, without sound Trace in alabaster..." "...Hold registry of noble man and maiden fair To look upon thy veiled face, and know serenity" serious applause for this 'penning' ! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Wow. This is beautiful. You are my twin in writing style, although you are talented and I suck. I just prefer attempting to write like this, the classical sounding style of poetry. You are always perfect in this Kathy. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow this reminds me of something we would have studied in college lit class |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely magical, dear TD! Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is my kind of poem, Diamond. Ida |
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