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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-02-11 11:44 AM


Can’t stop the feelings
That come with a rush
Brightly colored memories
That cascade through a hazy brain
In moments that I cannot control
Nor would I,
Even if I knew how
I need to slow down
Movements from day to day
I have lost my imagination
My drive, the need to create –
That thing which makes us human

Where does my life go?
So young to be over so soon.
I am not in control anymore
I am losing ground to chaos
Everything is spinning
And flying so fast
Nothing is clear
I’ve got to hold on
To something steady in my life
But sadly, there is nothing

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2010-02-11 03:24 PM


too young indeed
shake off those dead leaves, grow again
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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
2 posted 2010-02-11 04:30 PM


Well I am old now. lol

Hey inked...haven't seen you in a long time.
Thank you.

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