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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2010-02-09 06:03 AM

If I were but a butterfly,
quietly landing upon your sill,
would you sleep in deepest sleep,
and not notice me still?,

Softly as you breathe the cool night air,
I would gently float as if a vaporous cloud,
landing upon your lofty bed of dark brown hair,
your head to be covered in a white, misty shroud.

Vivid dreams of times past you deeply dream,
as they slowly escape your peaceful head,
flowing softly through your mind stream,
into that sacred realm where angels tread,

All through the night, I am by your side,
sharing my love continously as if invisible,
my love for you is deep as it is wide,
nothing can compare, imeasurable.

When the golden sun begins to peek through,
my time draws near for me to fly,
for it breaks my heart to leave you,
I spread my wings into the air, and cry.

And I wonder if you ever noticed me ?

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (02-09-2010 08:07 AM).]

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

1 posted 2010-02-09 05:52 PM

This is a new style for you.

I like it a great deal.

The first two stanzas were incredibly strong.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-02-10 05:51 AM

Enjoyed this beautiful delicate write very much, dear ARH!

Lovely thoughts romantically expressed.

Love,
Margherita

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2010-02-13 02:55 AM

Powdery-soft sentiments
(and could make a base for a nice sonnet).

I like it. Good job, ARH.

CG

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

4 posted 2010-03-16 11:20 PM

That last stanza was wonderful.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2010-03-16 11:56 PM

This is beautiful, great presentation and I especially loved the last stanza.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2010-03-17 10:56 PM

When the golden sun begins to peek through,
my time draws near for me to fly,
for it breaks my heart to leave you,
I spread my wings into the air, and cry.

And I wonder if you ever noticed me ?

ARH you have written a delightful poem that was a delight to read, I loved it.

Keep up the good work.

Lindsay

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

7 posted 2010-03-18 10:38 AM

Beautiful, just beautiful.

Z.

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