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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-12-22 02:36 PM


she said she wanted a special man
whose kisses would leave her panting
so I bought the biggest bag at costco

and pressed them to her window pane
while she was on a call instead of lunch

she gave me the finger in return
and I glanced at my watch for moments
and then nodded that I had the time

she turned her back to me quickly then
before I could see that smile begin

and that her breathing for sure had quickened


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[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-22-2010 03:52 PM).]

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2010-12-22 03:13 PM


I like kisses!  And I like this.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-12-22 03:48 PM


thanks lil ali-san..do lunch?
Sunshine
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3 posted 2010-12-22 05:18 PM


LOL...Ali, do lunch? Of course she does lunch...but it's probably not lumpy oatmeal! Ali!

This was cute, Sir...
do it again?


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2010-12-22 06:19 PM


Thanks ms sun...have a great holiday lady!!
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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5 posted 2010-12-23 06:13 AM


I had to read this over to figure out what you got a "big bag" of haha. Kisses. Simple and sweet. Enjoyed

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2010-12-23 09:28 AM


thanks ms sinz...

have a great holiday

Margherita
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7 posted 2010-12-26 06:53 PM


A big bag of kisses is the sweetest gift ...

This is electrically charged!

Happy Holidays!

Love,
Margherita

ethome
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8 posted 2010-12-26 06:59 PM


Kisses from Costco
Man I learn a lot in this place.
I'll put that in my BAG of tricks.
You training men how to be lovers on the side????

Good one.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2010-12-27 06:53 AM


ms mar...thanks lady friend.


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et...thanks guy...I learned from the best..(angry women)

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