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day at the beach |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198
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Broken bottles of colored glass wash ashore on the sand children with their pailes and shovels dig for treasure by hand crowds of sunbathers stretch across the sand to be tanned swimmers braved the cold waters some unable to withstand boats of all colors and shapes sail, others tied down unmanned sunset ,lovers strolls, beach towels fold and the crowds disband. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sounds like a pretty good day at the beach. Surf and sand have never been my thing, but I understand the draw. Mine is the mountains. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done! Loved the rhymes! Kat >^..^< |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like list poems like this with many colorful images cascading down the page. Well done! Eric |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Jones Beach in Long Island, NY comes to mind as I read this. It was there that the ocean current almost swept me out to sea to never be seen again. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Reading this lovely summer poem, just while it is snowing outside, gives a funny feeling. What season are we in?  Somewhere no doubt it is summer ... Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where, indeed, is this wonderful waterfront? Enjoyed this very much, Mike. Thank you. |
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