Open Poetry #46 |
you come / from the shower |
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since 2006-04-29
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you come from the shower, white towel around your hips -- an albino leaf about to fall and even before it reaches the floor I am remembering I am writing this I am framing the photograph I am attending your funeral I am an old man lost in the scent of you as I dry my wrinkled face in a white towel poetry podcasts, blogs and photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Surreal portrait and a journey into life with one glance. Happens. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful. Great style as always. Ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done! Love the format and phrasing. Eric |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As I read this, I am reminded of French artists, and poets, who took real, and left it, real. Thank you, Poet. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Another outstanding write. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Substance and style. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
touches me, more than one could know~ M |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Incredible longing in this one. Love it! Dave |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Iam beyond impressed with this one. You portray an entire lifetime in a few short lines in an amazingly powerful way.....terrific!! |
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