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Open Poetry #46

Closer to the Clouds

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2010-01-31 09:09 PM

Closer to the Clouds

With hands raised and
soft music in my heart,
my feet slowly leave the ground.
Troubles and worry,
hatred and scorn
fall away and dissappear.

My soul sings,
love has lifted me.

Zeitgeist

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2010-01-31 09:52 PM

How absolutely uplifting! Well cone.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2010-01-31 11:52 PM

Love is great.

This was a really good read, it made my heart smile.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2010-02-01 12:17 PM

Oh the power of love. latearrival

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2010-02-01 05:04 AM

Yes!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2010-02-01 11:34 AM

smiled at this

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2010-02-01 12:09 PM

Just meditated and the feeling was close to your own perception. Very nice!

Love,
Margherita

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

7 posted 2010-02-01 08:50 PM

Thanks to all my friends here at PiP. This is a great poetry site filled with great people.

Zeitgeist

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2010-02-14 11:44 PM

Very nice - I kind of feel like this when I eat too much marshmallow fluff. You shared a beautiful poem with us.

A

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2010-02-17 06:51 PM

Enjoyed...James

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2010-03-15 11:27 PM

Yes, love is beautiful, as are your words

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2010-03-16 11:50 PM

Zeigeist - a poem to be touched by...

BC

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