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Open Poetry #46

Gusty Day

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2010-10-19 04:29 PM

Gusty Day

I see that
Fall is lurking around
With his heavy coat on.
He walks up the street
With gusty wind in his autumn hair.
When he comes close to me,
I tell him to go away and
Come back later if he must.
He just laughs and kicks
A large pile of leaves,
Scattering them in my yard.

Zeitgiest

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2010-10-19 07:59 PM

This is just like a painting, the wind blown colors are so vivid and true.

Nice writing, Zeigeist~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2010-10-20 03:58 AM

I've never seen the sense in raking

nice write

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2010-10-20 08:03 AM

Hope he came back to help you rake it together again

Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

4 posted 2010-10-20 09:25 AM

Great personification! enjoyed! ebm

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

5 posted 2010-10-20 10:20 PM

thank you all for your wonderful replies to this little poem.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2010-10-24 11:35 AM

Unique and enjoyable, Zeigeist, Love it.
Ida

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