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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-01-29 06:10 PM



Always Miss Kim


"My arms are empty without you."

If I wanted
to spend the
rest of my life
loving you,
would you
want that too

or would I

spend the
rest of my life
missing you.

Always Miss Kim.


JamesLee
17January
2010




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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-01-30 09:44 AM


The doubts of a heart full of love. Beautifully expressed, dear James.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2010-02-01 11:33 PM


Thank you Margherita for the nice response...James
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3 posted 2010-02-14 11:52 PM


James,

This is very poignant.  I have to wonder if there is an answer, and then I realize that I don't care if there is.  I just like your poem.

A

Juju
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4 posted 2010-02-14 11:57 PM


Some people are worth it. I hope she was worth all this pain you have suffered all these years. I know for me, he wasn't. I weep for all I missed in that time, and now I pray I will never do that mistake again.

-Juju

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

2islander2
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5 posted 2010-02-15 01:40 AM


Hello James, this is so true, "one being is missing you and everything is emptyness" (a french poet Lamartine I think)thanks for the important words.

yann

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