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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2010-01-29 02:16 AM





Sweet Love,
There are days I wait for one word,
it is as if, the walls of the earth
have crumbled,
can life, death, be measured equal?
I think not!
These whispering pines speak your name,
as I walk down trodden paths of tall grass,
a dark loneliness begins to set in.
I am jealous of the sun, the moon,
all these can see you, touch your warm face,
yet I cannot,
Every moment you have a breath, I breathe too,
only my breath quivers in shallow depths,
accompanied by warm flowing tears.
Why must life be so cruel? to feed you
love upon a silver platter with trimmings,
then remove it, asking for a diet, or death.
Starvation eats up my soul, every minute,
your laughter I do not hear, your smile,
I cannot see, malnutrition will be the
death of me,
There is more to life than all the eye
can behold, I have found real beauty,
felt it, held it in my heart,
I have floated high above every tree,
so high of an elavation, rare it is,
it is the bird of paradise, of happiness,
one that is extinct.
The world is dieing , with all the romantic
poets of old, I stand here in this moment
of pure beauty, in silence, waiting,
for the sky to split, waiting...
to feast again, from your lovely,
sweet, poet heart.


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-30-2010 03:48 PM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-01-30 09:47 AM


Love deprivation is a very intense suffering indeed and you gave voice to this painful state very intensely, dear ARH.

Beautiful in its sadness.

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2010-01-30 03:52 PM


Thank you Marg~

yes, love is powerful, even the sadness is powerful...

~ARH

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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3 posted 2010-01-31 05:02 PM


Why must life be so cruel?

[one of the (unanswerable?) 'essential questions' indeed!]

"... with all the romantic
poets of old, I stand here in this moment
of pure beauty, in silence, waiting...

to feast again, from your lovely,
sweet, poet heart."

fine ending to this walk on the 'dark-side' of Romance ...

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