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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2010-01-28 09:43 PM


Bones remembers the farmer
as his father figure.  

As cruel and brutal as he was,
Bones reveres the farmers memory,
as a father that Bones never knew.  

Yes,
the farmer was
a substitute father to Bones,
and Bones loved him,
and acted as a son
at the farmer’s funeral.

Bobby

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2010-01-31 05:21 PM


Yo Bones,

That's okay Bones, I like your story even if no one else does.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2010-02-04 06:29 PM


Very nice...James
Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2010-02-04 08:14 PM


Thanks James,

For the very kind words on this poem.

Bobby

Earl Brinkman
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Osaka, Japan
4 posted 2010-08-10 09:24 PM


Yo Bones, I know your story too.
Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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Redlands,CA,USA
5 posted 2010-08-10 10:35 PM


Bones... Sometimes we just have to take what is offered and make the best of it. Seems you do that on a regular basis.  But then I guess that's easy for me to say in this situation, given that my father is everything I could want in the man who holds the position. Sorry for your loss on many levels here.
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2010-08-12 12:16 PM


Bobby - this is good, Bones had a place...

BC

Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2010-08-12 01:24 AM


I knew someone they called bones once....I think he would like this....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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