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rosepetals36
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0 posted 2010-09-15 01:36 PM



Sighs

Soft escaped sighs
mixing with the gentle breeze
carried through the land




Peace

A moment of peace
shared with a bright night sky.
A perfect ending.



-- Used to be rosepetals25     I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
1 posted 2010-09-15 07:08 PM


Great job! Love these   ...

Marti

BeyaK
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2 posted 2010-09-16 11:03 AM


this is really nice... love it

~~*K. B.*~~

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2010-09-16 11:47 AM


intreresting how the first lines of these two are interchangable between them....cool stuff ms
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