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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2010-09-10 10:42 AM




She stands, hearing me, on the other side of the Rockies
                     Her voice travels in song waves, with no slip of travail
E'en when my wailing takes me to my knees
                     Listening is to hear the sun through the gale

And northern wind, blow me ever away
                     Such sweet depth of thought is not constrained
For only one can hear what this heart would say
                     Into the mind like piano's fingered refrain

And the echo lies within the valley's core
                   The cry and laughter fly with harmonies wings
That I would sing this song of you, forevermore
                   Then like listening wind I have learned how to sing



My gratitude to our Flower Girl, Martie, whom in duet, makes us all fly...

And I repost in honor of her, and in
hopes that she is soon feeling
better...mend that ankle, dear!




© Copyright 2010 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Eusta B. Mae
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1 posted 2010-09-10 11:04 AM


What a treat Sunshine! Thanks for sharing. ebm
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2010-09-11 04:49 AM


Fine writing...James
icebox
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in the shadows
3 posted 2010-09-11 10:28 AM


Sweet!!!



Denise
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4 posted 2010-09-11 10:36 AM


Very sweet, Karilea!

Get well quickly, Martie!

Martie
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5 posted 2010-09-11 12:21 PM


Thanks Sissie....and and poet friends here...Sure do appreciate the thoughts and well wishes.  
Margherita
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6 posted 2010-09-11 05:18 PM


Beautifully done!

Get well quickly, dear Martie!

Love and hugs to both.

Margherita

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7 posted 2010-09-13 08:55 PM


Oh that's so nice!!  The distance between us is so close, if we just listen...

and write our hearts out!  

I can tell you two share a special bond, and it's heartwarming, truly!!!

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