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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2010-01-26 05:41 PM


              true spirit

music on this moon-frost night
sadness in a thousand chords
all thoughts trend to emptiness
amid the indifferent shadows
   and press of years
her fine, true spirit … missing
memories sweet and cruel

            --- b. e. adams (1/26/2010)


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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-01-26 05:45 PM


This makes me sigh, dear Bruce. Very poignant.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2010-01-26 07:30 PM


This is why I save all of your poetry. Bruce. Your poetry may be melancholy but it is also divine, containing that spark of genius that is so rare.
                               Ida


Bill Charles
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3 posted 2010-01-26 11:02 PM


secondhanddreampoet - I agree with Margaret, couldn't find the words, but see says them well...

BC

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2010-01-27 06:28 AM


It's that press of years that  makes one think back to all the good~~

M

The Lady
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5 posted 2010-01-28 11:32 PM




"sadness in a thousand chords"

a song often sung
oh Bruce, this is lovely.


OwlSA
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6 posted 2010-02-01 03:47 PM


Tears

Owl

Alison
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7 posted 2010-02-14 11:41 PM


Bruce,

My favorite part of the Olympic opening ceremony was listening to Donald Sutherland read the poetry and quotes.  I can hear him read your poem - and it is beautiful in my head and on the PiP pages.  You have a heart that reaches out to many of us.

Your friend,
Alison

2islander2
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8 posted 2010-02-15 01:49 AM


shining words about the melancholy, great poem.

yann

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2010-02-15 10:23 AM


wow! this touches


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