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Keeping Time |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
There is no offer Or invitation Only hot come hither winds Howling through my sins Of inclination Come passion For my Hapless heart’s Keeping time alone Unrequited |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
both sensual and frustration come through that ends in one sad word.. I like the tight form, the few words used to convey a lot and yet, not too much... so the reader can take from this to some degree as they wish... |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
rosepetals36-Thanks! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Cpat-didn't mean to appear to ignore your response. They are fantastically in depth often longer than my little poems. I do so appreciate the time you take to share your thoughts. Thank you, I am honored. ebm |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
now this is one i wish i had written... jwesley |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Wonderful; concise and powerful in their portrayal of longing... well done! ~Amaryllis |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so powerful in its brevity. Great job. Love, Margherita |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
jwesley-I consider that to be the finest compliment and I thank you!ebm ------------------------------------------ Amaryllis-Thanks for your cometary it is much appreciated! ebm ---------------------------------------- Margherita-You make my little poem feel like a big one- thanks! ebm |
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