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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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So long September clings to summer’s green So soon does life deny that sacred dream Too early do the summer sparrows fly So soon a fleeting moment passes by Some years were lived, some years were quickly lost It’a love that always pays the bitter cost Too soon the passing seasons turn to years Too soon a rainbow always disappears Too long it seems to take for life to start Too long does love consume a weeping heart We can’t reclaim the love we once denied Too soon a fleeting moment passes by |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
So true... lovely poem. ~Sunkissed  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done ma'am.... enjoyed reading this. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz...life and time...what would one be without the other? Though time seems to be a robber, it is also a giver. Love you and this poem and the thoughts it brought me.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Life is going by these days just far too quickly for me that is for sure. Take care dear Lizzy. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
We have to make the most of those fleeting moments that are gone too soon, and then relive them in our memories. This is lovely Elizabeth! It's so great to see you here again! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I so enjoy your poetry. The years are really flying now, and your poem conveys the whole idea, how we look back and yea, it seems like yesterday. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love your poetry, Liz. Ida |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Beautiful write, enjoyed it very much. ebm |
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