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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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Been a while since I have been here let alone wrote anything. But wrote my first song in years back in June and figured I would share. Hope everyone likes it. Turn Your Radio On By: Jesse C. Jaymz Another day has come and gone Another roads been traveled on All these highway exits look the same I'm so lonely, and it aint right That I'm not there, to hold you tight But baby I'm not really all that far away Just turn it on, and close your eyes Let your mind go and fantasize Me next to you, singing every song I'll be back home, before to long Every song a memory Of the love between you and me So baby close your eyes and sing along And I'll be with you, Just turn your radio on I'm there in every sad song To hold you while you cry I'm there in every love song To look deep in your eyes We're never really that far apart As The radio plays the songs in our hearts And baby, this one goes out to you Just turn it on, and close your eyes Let your mind go and fantasize Me next to you, singing every song I'll be back home, before to long Every song a memory Of the love between you and me So baby close your eyes and sing along And I'll be with you, Just turn your radio on I miss your kisses, your loving touch Sometimes life on the road, Can be to much But don't worry, I'll Be back home soon. Just turn it on, and close your eyes Let your mind go and fantasize Me next to you, singing every song I'll be back home, before to long Every song a memory Of the love between you and me So baby close your eyes and sing along And I'll be with you, Just turn your radio on... |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nice read (song)! I can hear the music! Kat >^..^< |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Thank you katahdin. Glad you can hear the music to it. That's is a true feat when you can hear the music just from reading the lyrics. Thank you. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Wish we could hear this performed. Enjoyed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done sir... nice to read you again. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Thank you everyone. Good to be back. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Works for me... nice tune... worked in radio for 15 years, so I know a thing or two about lyrics. Peace. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Thank you for commenting. Always good to know when your songs will work in the area your trying to get at. Thank you for the wonderful comment and stopping by. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I agree with the others.. you have what it takes to write this way!  ~Amaryllis |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I wish I could hear the melody! Great writing! ~Sunkissed |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Thank you Amaryllis and Sunkissed. I just downloaded a recording program about a week ago and still playing with it. If I can get it to work right I might have to record this one and of course offer it to ones who would like it. Thank you for replying!! |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
You already know that I love your writing  . I bet this woudl sound great with guitar and vocals!<b>-- Used to be rosepetals25 before I tried to change my email lol</b> |
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