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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. How different It would have been Even now At this distance I know that sun Meant for two as one In love could have shined For the both of us What a world We would have made In some happily obscure Hidden part of it Our whole lives Lived in light If only Instead of her It was you Not merely a picture Down in the corner Of a page Smiling Looking out On the future Passing by In my ignorance With such beautiful softly Wonderfully intelligent eyes . |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Ah, hindsight is 20/20.. and poems of soft regrret always make me wistful... nicely done ~Amaryllis |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
yes, well done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Unrequited love does inspire but it does not bring happiness. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Words, pictures, tuneful sounds; regrets, suffering physically and emotionally---what a strange world this is sometimes! At least semi-understood and appreciated. |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I enjoyed this, you portray the ache of unfulfilled possibility with great poignancy. - Anya |
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