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Open Poetry #46

Akashan Dreams

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-08-07 08:25 PM

                Akashan Dreams

Come sail these misty morning waters
on this lovely lake of dreams
and watch the traceless wakes,
of all that moves or changes here,
coalescing as one with water, sky
  and consciousness ...
separateness being but a stubbornly
  persistent illusion.

                    --- b. e. adams (8/7/2010)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2010-08-07 10:57 PM

I relate so well to your poetry, Bruce. I collect them all because I feel they speak directly to me.
Ida

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-08-07 11:20 PM

Very good!

Nature's sartorial splendor, human satori... and there surely can be a taste or hint of Nirvana about the misty morning, especially upon a wilderness lake (and especially headed east).

Well-worded and intuitive, thanks!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-08-09 08:13 AM

Stunning, dear Bruce.

... and for the second time today I read "coalescing" ... great word.

Love,
Margherita