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I Still Demand a hug
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I Still Demand a hug |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Red because red is the color of Desire Okay, it’s bee two years, And I’m still waiting. I demand a hug. I demand a hug, right now. I am very, very demanding! (So, like Romantic heart says) come over here, right now! Stop what you're doing and just come over here, right now, or I'll go over there and just TAKE you. I want a big, full body hug. I want you to hug me real close and real tight. I want to be close to you in spirit, because bodies can just get in the way, you know. I demand a hug. I am very, very demanding. Please don't make me come get you ... I demand a hug, and it has to be with you, right now! Please? ... ... ... ... Please? ... .... ... Please? ... ... ... Inspired by a sunny day WITH you. Hey, nobody's human! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 fantastic! |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
love it, just add the n to been |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nice! I want a hug too! Kat >^..^< |
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Loveandlaughter Junior Member
since 2010-07-24
Posts 13 |
agree with everything this poem says. funny, but recently i stopped being friends with somebody because they didnt hug me as i was leaving..yes i take my hugs rather seriously and enjoyed this greatly |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
SweetDaddy! A day with out a hug is like a day without sunshine! EBM |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
Now I need to find someone to give ME a hug. |
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