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Nebula / Nauplii
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Nebula / Nauplii |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Being torn to shreds like a nebula---forming stars like a poet. *** A winning word in Scrabble™ it can be... larvae of shellfish: nauplii. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Succinct and vivid ~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
not a wasted word.... nice~~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very enjoyable to read, bravo Easy1 |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed Ida |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Being torn to shreds like a nebula---forming stars like a poet. WOW! Awesome! I think that's how I was formed as a poet. REALLY nice piece! You are truly a haiku master! This is going to be a favorite of mine! |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Thank you all for your kind comments. martiniat8, again I have to say I do not know what a "haiku master" is, nor even if these poems seem like haiku to very many these days, but I do hope more haiku/senryu-type pieces, such as those from the user Huan Yi, are posted in this forum soon. It can be fun trying to communicate observations in this way. As for the tortured artist and the physical universe, hmmm... The moons and other satellites orbit planets, planets and asteroids and comets orbit stars, stars orbit the centers of their galaxies, but what do the galaxies and clusters orbit? Seems a natural progression, one which is somewhat dfficult to take past that question, at least for now.  |
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