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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2010-07-07 04:43 AM




Number two
is...difficult.

My specs are always
ludicrous

if not

they are

preposterous,

aphasiatics

(watch for stars)

whimpering osmotic pain:

those blues that twinkle

light my brain

like I am Star Wars--again.

I-am-your-father

I am pain.

I'm the darrrr...
j'jah--jeeling
simper
simmering
your tea

stuh-stuh-stuh-stuh

stuttering

straining limmed leafs

in your bed.

I'll tell your fortune

sans the blame--

watch the patterning

and guess

my sincerity.

* * *

Exercize Two from Bobk

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bel1e
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1 posted 2010-07-07 06:57 AM


love that the images here are infused with pop culture~  

         

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-07-07 11:15 AM


like this on several levels...
one can read into it as they wish it would seem
sans the blame, of course

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2010-07-08 06:01 PM


I'll tell your fortune sans the blame- I love it,
                          Ida

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2010-07-08 09:35 PM


Thanks.

Some days I miss Farmville, though, I do confess...

*smile*

It gave me the delusion of being productive.

My poetry, if we would call it that, seems to enhance the self-loathing stuff.

I was going to do all twenty of Bobk's writing prompts, but I think I'll spare you guys.




2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2010-07-10 10:05 AM


beautiful words, i enjoyed the beauty of the write.

regards

yann

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