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Moon Dreams |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Moon Dreams I read your whispers following them with fingers like braille in the darkness your body echoes mine and breath is but a night’s song "I'm so hard to handle |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
oh~~~ indeed this is sultry and so very well done... enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick.. you suggest and leave edges makes my mind want to open the box and see how the whispers sound |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very romantic. |
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zeusthamghty Junior Member
since 2010-06-20
Posts 45west virginia, usa |
verry well done |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
So beautiful as always Helen! I hope you and the fam have a happy fourth of july! Richard xx |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Another jewel, Poetess. Ida |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
very pretty. Joe |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Of course this works as a sleeping lover in the moonlight poem. I had to try reading it as a loner gazing at the moon traced by wispy clouds poem, too, and imho it works there also. |
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