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Open Poetry #46

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2010-06-24 07:58 AM

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Ah after all is said
And done— fireflies searching
For one night stands

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Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

1 posted 2010-06-24 11:50 AM

"A man who has no imagination has no wings"
Muhammad Ali. However, fireflies do have wings and so does your poetry.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2010-06-24 11:09 PM

excellent

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

3 posted 2010-06-25 12:28 PM

And brief is a firefly's life, too. At least they are not day trippers.

Another appreciated short. Keep them coming, please.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2010-06-25 01:08 PM

exquisite.

yann

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2010-06-25 03:33 PM

Yo John,

We all try to appear to be the brightest, and best.

Bobby

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

6 posted 2010-06-26 07:28 AM

Clever.

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

7 posted 2010-06-26 12:31 PM

Made me smile, succinct with a real sense of wit.

Kethry D
Member

since 2010-04-12

Posts 64
Australia

8 posted 2010-06-26 09:31 PM

and aren't we all... fireflies I mean.

A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof.

Rene Char

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