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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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0 posted 2010-01-18 07:01 PM



It's quiet here,
between my ears

Solitary sanctuary

Just over the hill,
past the tip of my nose,
lies a world of feudal gods.

Where, even in the Land
of Plenty of Plenties,
there is a sense of lacking.

A fear of dying
and even
blue blood
is running.

Running in circles

I cannot say,
"Like a chicken
with its head cut off"

For there is peace
in being a headless chicken
and I have never heard one squawk

The current running
is filled with much clucking

In a land that has always
been plagued with the cry,
"Bring out your dead !"

So, I await the deaths.

When only one last
describable god remains,
and it perishes from old age.

Leaving only man.

To begin again.

To limit

To name and describe

Running in circles

Can man exist without gods?

I only know that gods
cannot exist without man.

Many gods have ceased to be.

Man remains.

"For in himself
he is not god
Only in man,
does he become God"

Man shall never
take on godhood

No matter the squawking

It has been said that
God took on manhood

So, I await
the last man.

The first man.

It's quiet here,
between my ears

Solitary sanctuary


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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2010-01-18 07:09 PM


Oh, my gods! lol XO, this poem was brilliant and simply amazing ~ especially given that ~

"It's quiet here,
between my(your) ears"

There's a lot of interesting pondering going on in your "solitary sanctuary"!

Love & God's/gods'/Man's Light,
XO Linda

www.lindadowd.com

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2010-01-18 07:34 PM


Teach me?

My head is too noisy to be a temple of anything but Chaos.

Oh. Lookit. I am resurrecting Gods again.

Love your work.

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