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Open Poetry #46

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Bladecatcher
Junior Member

since 2008-11-25

Posts 15

0 posted 2010-06-19 08:48 PM

The most depressing thing
about cars is that
no matter how far they take you
they cant take you away from
where youve been
and cigarettes remind me
of my Father
because you never
can just walk away
can you? To many lies taste like
Marlboro Red 72s and they
both leave a burnt plastic taste
wrapped around your brain. So I
smoke it down
to the filter, smile encouragingly, and
light up another one.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2010-06-20 08:42 PM

The things we remember, those that remind us and how we celebrate are so sharply unique. So stinging and hauntingly real.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-06-21 01:14 AM

A depressing read, but it does resonate. What can one say? Enjoy the benefits of anonymity and take a hike, maybe with a camera and no cigs... smell the proverbial flowers that way. Wish I could.

Ha. You made me think, so the poem succeeds in the eye of the beholder!

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